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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. please please please please please do another chapter or sequel. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!............Tash
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really seeing that it needs a whole lot of polish but it does beg for a sequel. I feel it was well written and you could leave it just as it is. Of course if you think you can imporve on it with out over doing it then by all means you should.