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for Without You

by kimba6565

person Anon
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person OMG
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A little too "sweet" for my liking - needed more development. What trust did Hermoine break? How did Severus and Hermoine get together in the first place, etc. Keep writing though, you definitely have ability.
person Hypatia
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.K...I'm an old geezer and admit it readily...but WTF is a
"songfic??" And what is its purpose???? Can I write down the lyrics to "Stairway to Heaven"and lovingly post them on the LOTR board?? LOTR was the impetus for the song...BTW. Would this advance the story...hinder it..or just be stupid?

Surely there are writers here who can write a poem to insert into their fanfic, if the trite need rears its head. Until then...I'm at a loss.
person Lilith
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read the story because I like the song. I was disappointed.
person SnapesPet30
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! There are no other words to describe this story.
person sheedy
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. The first one you post is the hardest. It gets easier from here. Great start.