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for FIRE DANCING

by nixwilliams

schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah! "boys, boys, boys" as manny from black books might say. let's cool it down, huh?

girl_, i'm glad you understand the "drabble" aspect of a drabble (a lot of people don't seem to), i.e. that it is a very short, usually 100w, piece. as such the writer can choose either to skip the details and tell a whole story in the cliched "broad brush strokes," or can pick out one moment and try to tell a story through the minutae. i find that the best drabbles stick in your mind, and you want to read them again. hopefully some of mine do that for the readers here!

tom, the only reason i'm not removing your reviews is that i find them rather amusing, and i can't quite tell if you're being serious. please play nice with other reviewers, if not with me. (that goes for all of you!)
person Tom
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At least I can spell vegetarian, my dear girl_anachronism. So butt out of what I do or don't read thankyouverymuch. *hmph*
person nabootheenigma
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, this is more like it. Mmmmmmmm, lesbians. (Sorry, that was a bit Homer Simpson-esque.) Again, very nice images. I like it. Hermione coming in from the cold of experimental heterosexuality into the fires of hot lesbian lovin' with the slut king lesbian lover extraordinaire, Ginny. Not that Harry *isn't* hot, of course, but just with the right people *cough*draco*cough*. Excuse me. Good work team. More I say. You don't write enough of the lesbian stuff. You should embrace the fire that I know burrrrrrrrrrns inside you. Let it out. Burrrrrrrrrrrrrn up the internet nixy baby.
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loquacious.. that's you, nabootheenigma... i'm naboo, that's who, get in my hoover bag you boo!!! i have a request: a bob fossil/draco malfoy crossover. of course after you finish my tumnus/pippin fic! also thanks james, i'm glad you like the drabble action.
person Tom
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why AFF don't strike you off the list. I think I might report you. What is this rated - PG or something????!!!1!??!*%^#$ And why is it so short? I know you can write hoter stuff than this, despite all the fire references. Where is the sex? What are you afraid of? I bet you're a vegetarian or something.
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, tom. tom, tom, tom. not getting any action from greg yet, i take it? shall i write you some?
person Tom
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greg can frikkin' die for all I care. And maybe he is dead. I'd surely be the last to know. I'm not privy to that kind of information, the bastard. So don't write me anything to do with that tosser or I'll come at you like a nun sandwich. You could write something about pirates ... you know, if you wanted.
person james
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you get alot into the 100 words, like hints of the whole relationship with ginny and mione, and it still works by itself, even if its a sequel.
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..that was a bit confusing but I think I get it...
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's great, but maybe just a little confusing