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Nice chapter. Playing on Harry's committment to other people is something that Draco would use as a leverage.

It was weird when Harry call Draco an idiot becuase of the bonding robes, but the rest of the chapter is very good.

Update soon!

Please, dear author, i beg you to write more chapters

owwwwwwwwww this story 's great ,please update soon ,neh

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This is good you know what I was thinking you could do ok you know when Harry is pregnant you could have Draco realize that he loves him but is to stubborn to admit it and towards the end of the story have him almost loose Harry like have Hsrry end up in a coma and Draco stays by his side heart broken and here is a song that could help you write that "This Womans work"

This Woman's Work
Maxwell

Pray to God you can cope
I'll stand outside
This woman's work
This woman's world
Oooh, it's hard on the man
Now his part is over
Now starts the craft of the father


I know you have a little life in you yet
I know you have a lot of strength left
I know you have a little life in you yet
I know you have a lot of strength left

I should be crying but I just can't let it show
I should be hoping but I can't stop thinking
All the things we should've said that I never said
All the things we should of done that we never did
All the things we should've given but I didn't

Oh darling make it go
Make it go away
Give me these moments
Give them back to me
Give me little kiss
Give me your hand

I know you have a little life in you yet
I know you have a little strength left
I know you have a little life in you yet
I know you have a little strength left

I should be crying but I just can't let it show
I should be hoping but I can't stop thinking
Of all the things we should've said that we never said
All the things we should've done that we never did
All the things that you wanted from me
All the things that that you needed from me
All the things I should of given but I didn't
Oh darling make it go away
Just make it go away now.

So what do you think

^_^ hello thanks for the update heh, and sorry for not reviewing other chaps. anyway I really like your writing stil it great. I really like that you just bring in just the right amound of detal , I dont really like to read storys with to much detal gets kinda boring (only storys that i will read with lots of detali is Anne Rices vamp cronicals) Anyways thanks for the up-date hope the next chap comes soon.

Oh I need chapter 5! Will Draco keep his promise? With the additional magic couldn't Harry break free?

My poor Harry. Your story is wonderful, I enjoy it very much!

i would lke to be on the mailing list! my mail is apri89@hotmail.com that was a wonderful chapter and i love this fic so much! I cant wait til the next chapter comes out! and that whole Blaise thing...I just dont get why alot of pople make hm blond...said right in the book he had black hair...and back when i read the first book i took dark skinned as italian...i was only 12 at the time though so...

You have no idea how much I love your story. Amazing. I can't wait till the next chapter D:
Yes >:D