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for Yes, My Lord

by AliAnn

person juliet
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love thestory I really love master draco stories, and just slave harry in general. please continue with this story and update soon thanks Juliet
person bethie
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story its the first one ive read where harry didnt win which is odd because i dont pass them over for that reason but im enjoying very much and would love it if you could let me know when you update thank you and happy writing and may your muse always be around
person Storm
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you have updated this story. I was worried that you had ended it after AFF went offline and did all sorts of different things. I can't wait for chapter 6. Great job by the way and keep up the good work.
person Brittany
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH, you have to update!!! Or I will go crazy, i swear it!!!!
person yuu_sprite
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Yay! You're back! *sprinkles flower petals all around*

I was suffering from acute withdrawal symptoms for a moment there. Oh, and it's such a delicious chapter this is. got my mouth simply watering wanting more.

I wander whats with the glowing rings? Was it becaus they were soul mates? Was it a representation of their immense powers? (even if one has thier's locked away? Or maybe *gasp* it was some bad hollywood CG effects?

I'm dying to find out what the hell is happening! Oh and I wander, is 'Draco falls in love with Harry (not just wants to screw the life out of him), while wooing him' part of the plot?

This is a fabulously written chapter in an easy to read format just like the rest of them. (I find it so tedious to read those fics who have no space between paragraphs, don't start a new paragraph when a different character is speaking or have ridiculously long paragraphs. Makes it seem like more of a chore to read it than actual fun.) Oh I'm rambling.

Anyways... I look forward to the next chapter and I hope you don't mind the long review. Also i hope that you remember my demands and deliver swiftly.

From the lazy-ass person
yuu_sprite
person ChArItY14
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeep! update soon because i LOVE it. probably one of the best hpdm D/s i have read ever. This had better have somewhat of a happy ending! I hate stories that end all angsty. They're depressing. Aww poor poor Hermione. I was never a big fan of her in the first place but still. So, do you plan on having Draco be any genuinely nicer to harry at all? you should. Oh and i love how Harry is all feminine. Everyone does it but it just seems to... work. -does a freaky little dance and chants mockingly- Voldy is gonna diiiie. Voldy is gonna diiiie.
muahahahaha

~Charity
person stargirl1180
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!
your story rocks. i love master draco and slave harry. you need to update in less the two weeks and then email me and tell me. one question. where is Lucius? is he still in azcaban or what, shouldn't he have been there to see his son become the new dark lord, i am very confused by his dissaperence. oh well up-date soon! great story. loves stargirl1180
person MSII
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
add me to your mailing list, yes? please?
person mphoniex
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this sotry is great.... i would like to be put on the mailing list...
person babyjam
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love youuuu!!! *falls to knees and grovels before your might* Please add me to your mailing list, I'm absolutely slobbering all over for the next chapter to come... is there anywhere else you may update your fic? Aff.net is evil to suspend all updates till March... to wait that long for a new chapter is killing me *sobs and rolls around on floor*