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for Yes, My Lord

by AliAnn

person avihenda
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah! you mangaged to update twice without me knowing it! How did you mangage that! must be magic... <_<
_GREAT_ two chapters! I really loved them.
I've allways wondered something. When harry freaks out about possble mpeg things, he never has as one of his resons to freaking, that he remembers "how babys are made"- picture slides or sex ed that show more then you'd actually wish them to show. You know the type they show at school. He did have the beginning of his education in a muggle school and I don't know about you, but I got scared by some of thouse. Any fun teories about that? ^_^ My latest is that everyone's trying so hard to forget theirs that they don't write about it. lol
I think harry's reaction to the hole mpeg is very realistic. That would be a chock to the system. Poor guy probably never even heard of mpeg before this. I liked the way Draco reacted to Harry taking the news so bad. unusually compassionet.
Wonder what Vold.s reasoning behind making harry a mother is and what harry is. Must be something special. Can't wait to find out!
You doing a great job. keep it up.
There use to be a good slave fic (LM/HP) by the name Pet but it disapeared just before xmas :-( it was really good. not much s&m but a really good slave fic. http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=36492 this one's an original and not completed, set in the roman empire. http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=12457 this one is really good HP/DM and this should be read just after it http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=12781 enjoy! and if you know of any other good ones, please let me know ^_^
person bandgirl101
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg...lol...i love ur story....i can't wait for more! Please update asap!
person LadyX
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm...domination...gotta love it. one question...whatr does it seem like most people that write the slah end up at l;east in smoe way feminising one of the guys?...i'be wondered the for a while..cant wait for more..this is gonna be SO good...
person Storm
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I got shivers from this last chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
person avihenda
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
huh!? my entire review except the first sentence, didn't get added??
What whent wrong?? >_< and I'd writen so much! Maybe coz I had added links to other fanfics?
eh, hope not.
If you would like the links, just e-mail me and you'll get them.
Great 2 chapters! they where brilliant.
person Susan
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes ..you did a great job. I'm become interesting with the story. Keep up the update !!
person The Doctors In
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and well it is to understand that you have a busy lifestyle. Perhaps in what little time you do have, would it not be easier to skip the personal comments to each and every reviewer? Just a general thank you would do the trick. People guessing how the story goes, will do just as well to wait and see just what happens. Its called suspense. Save yourself the valuble time and tell everyone along with your thanks to just wait and see. The doctor.
person *Dark!Vultrix*
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww ::Blushes:: I've never had a response to a review before ... I like your detailed version of Harry. Reminds me of High School. I went to High school in Central Florida, and there was always *TONS* of Pretty Spanish Boys that looked like that, put a damper on the girls!! LOL!! Yeah!! Draco's going to ravish Harry next chapter!! Whoot!!
person Rachel
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe poor Harry.

Oh, I hope Draco doesn't hurt/humiliate Harry too much, I always like better when Harry is a treasured pet then when he is a punching bag.

Doesn't seem to be the case, thought. Draco wants to bond with Harry, I doubt he would want Harry to be disrespected, whatever he does he will do in privet I think.

Ooooh, more, more, more.
person cyn
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my...i definately like this chapter too. I love how Draco is toying with him. That is totally awesome. *snickers* Harry will submit. you just have to love it!