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for Yes, My Lord

by AliAnn

person NIAMH
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hrmm... that mirror that harry was going to punch...


he should really get araound to doing that. the shards of the resulting broken mirror are quite sharp, or so ive heard. they could really do some damage to one's skin. *if* harry was planning on carrying out his suicide threat. of course, the dark lord would never be as silly as to leave harry in a room all by himself w/o having wards there, would he? so draco would know if harry ever tried to do anything like that.


hrmmmm oh sry, just some ideas. i have to say it or i'll go crazy =/


BUT OMG YAY UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!
person Bella
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person black*plague
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
person hp_strangelove
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I like how Draco is letting Harry think it's going to LV as "dad" - so Dracoish! And could Harry look any more "pretty" than Danny did in GoF?? I hope you keep up with this - I've become so frustrated with some of these that end up at 5 or 6 chapters and then nothing ever happens again.
person QueenB23
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Its hot. I cant wait for more. Just hope Draco doesn't rape him
person bayb43
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woh, kinda crazy, eh?:) I like it! Keep going!
person ura
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!

If you have a mailng list about updates, please add me in.
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh this story is getting really good. I find a lot of people have trouble with characterization but u have that down in spades. keep updating!!!
person anonymous
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Loved it. Why is it always Harry? The poor thing. Can't wait for the bonding to take place, please update soon.
person Chi
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, this sounds interesting. Draco is a bit dangerous and commanding, now isn't he?
And Harry! I've always thought he would be petite and slender, but this plot you came up with! It's amazing!
So, Draco already has plans... Let's see what they are, shall we...?