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This could be very interesting.

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**pokes the bunnies** I love it sooooo far please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

At first when I saw this title I thought it's the same one as the one in Fanfiction.net where harry was taken in by Snape instead of slash. I was surprised to see it's really different and I love the idea of harry being expelled from the world who didn't do single a thing for him when he entered. It's also good to see the goblins willing to help Harry to get him ready or belong some where before he have to defeat Voldie. It's a promising story hope to see more chapter will come after it. Keep up the good work. I see you mention some people in the story while shadowing the others. Like diverting the attention to else where.

Looking forward to more of the story.

Oh, plot bunnies! So soft. So cuddley. So Squishy. So hard to let go!!!! I love plot bunnies. Since I grew up and had to give up chocolate, Easter has never been the same. That was until I discovered the internet. Now bunnies are my favorite treat. I look forward to seeing how big yours grows and where it will take us. Nice touch with going back in time. And I look forward to the mercenary aspect.. It's a first for me!!! A truley unique bunny.

Sounds *puurrrrr*fect...

wants more, more, more, please more.............
am sooooo curious as to how Sev will respond to that...

This is different. I have never read a story like this before, similiar, but this is diffferent. I like it, yiou should continue writing. PLease. Pretty please.

i like its new and i love that harry is driving a motorcycle please update

I love it, but what will Severus do now that he knows his lover is Harry Potter?
Also, what's this about Harry being a mercenary and how did he end up with a spanish name, which everyone believed considering he was sixteen when he went to the past?