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This chapter rocked! But then i've enjoyed this story from the first chapter, i was really glad that you've decided to continue it. Did Harry seduce snape at the convention in Italy? Or was it just like they couldn't stop themselves type of deal? Can't wait for the next chapter!

I absolutely love this! What a great idea. Can't wait for more.

Normally I'm not much a fan of these types of stories, with time travel and all the changes Harry has made. But your writing style, the way you weave a story together, is truly incredible. I look forward to your next installment.

Wow great start I don't usually review anyone but nice

i'm s little confused about a few things and i don't particularly like that Harry has been given a new name...but over all i like it..keep writing

OK, this was pretty confusing! First you say 5 years had passed (which is right as it is the year 2000 in August....that would normally make Harry 20) Then you say "for the past 15 years" and stated later that he was sent back to the past. Ok, so if he went back and came forward as normal for 15 years, he should be 30.and would have JUST turned 30) At the end of the Tri-Wizard Tournament, he was just shy of 15, so another 15 years puts him at 30. If you MEANT to say that he was sent back 15 years at that time, it would NOW be 20 years later (not 15, as another 5 has passed) So as of August 2000 he would be 35, NOT 34. So is he 30 or 35? I realize to write a good story you don't need to be proficient in Math, but it sure helps if you are doing "Back in the past" stories. I just want to know if it's 15 years later (for Harry making him 30) or is it 20 years later, making him 35?

I KNOW I read this before. Both of these chapters. I have to tell you that I absolutely LOVE this story. Please update soon. I am not beyond begging just this once.

Wow...I Know that it is just one fo the bunnies...bit it is turning out really well! I hope the bunny keeps bugging you! Mwa ha ha ha ha! ~.~

Interesting fic. original ideas. Can't wait to find out what happens next. *Echo sets up spit to roast Dumbledore.* Please update soon.

This is a great story so far. I can't wait to read more.