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for He's My Mate!

by DrawFire

person Moony
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you don't like Sirius ? Oo'
how's that ?
how can one not like Sirius ?
anyway...i like the story,please continue
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I am home now. Yay! It's friday. I just finished reading your fic here and I am very happy with it. You must add another chapter soon as possible. So, the whole thing about Remus's 'problem' of having to reproduce...does that mean that he is going to get Severus pregnant? I suppose that Remus is a top. *smiles* That would be lovely. Bravo doll. Keep up the good work love.
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
putting this one in my favorites. hehe
person Miepje
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods! This story is great! Remus' actions and Severus' reactions are so much fun ^^

So *grins* Severus will have to "endure" some cuddling and petting (at least ^^)

Can't wait so update soon please...
person trustingfriendship
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By all means go as far as you'd like; I know I'm not going to stop you;-) You know your fic has me grinning like a fool...but *ahem* onto more constructive reiviewing...yay, Severus is accepting Remus's advances...well, at least a little...and hopefully more so after he saved him; can't wait for more:-)
person me
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I am so happy that you are updating so quickly! This story is soo much fun!! A brillient balance between plot and smut and all chatacters are wonderfully in character! Can not wait too see the next chapter! Please please please update soon!
person Newtype
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet fic thus far, please by all mean do write more on this one. I would like to read further on with the stroy.
person trustingfriendship
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start; I've always loved an alpha Remus; Sirius needs to get lost so Remus's wolf can make some progress; look forward to more:-)
person tamargrl
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I'm intrigued.
Update, please!
person aSeveruslover
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maybe instead of fixing the potion, it's the potion taker that needs to be...fixed? *coughs* *runs and hides*