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for He's My Mate!

by DrawFire

person Newtype
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed I cried. . I wondered why there was so little up. . .more please! Oh and when will Severus get a propper right bugging from remus? I want to know if Snape ever allows Remus to love him like he should be loved?
person trustingfriendship
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate how sad Severus's history is but I'm glad he had his mother and her side of the family; hope his cousin comes to visit; look forward to more:-)
person emz
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, im loving it so far, when it started i thought it was gonna be a shallow little orgasm filled fic, but to my surprise (and joy) its so much deeper, i cant wait to see what happens next!!!! the characters are written brilliantly, and the plot is much with the greatness.
if you can cd you email me when you update, i want to read the next chapter as soon as its up!!!!
xxx
person moondancer
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Severus
person andie
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Realy a good story! Poor Severus, I hope he does not have any chance to resist Remus - but he is fighting well!
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rawr. Oops. I am just a little freak and I have never read a story in which Remus and Severus had a baby. It just makes me all giggly. I've never really liked the Remus/Severus pairing very well but this story is successfully changing it. Anways, I feel embarassed now *blushes* Oops. Yay! A new chapter. I love you already. Yeah, I LOVE Sirius...I love him for who he is a whole but not the way he acts at times (well most of the time.) *smiles* I can see why you don't like him very well. He had NO reason to be a fucking ass to Severus. Thanks for the chapter. rawr. *blushes* keep up the good work.
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOBODY IS THROWING SIRIUS OUT OF THE WINDOW IF I CAN HELP IT. I love him. Although I say that I love him that doesn't mean that I never feel like throwing him out of a window. *smiles* Aw. Poor Sirius.
person me
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you for updateing so quickly! Please tell me the next chapter will be posted today/2morrow!!!!! I love where you have taken this - this brings "life debts" into the game! The end was absolutly classic! Are they going to "rock the boat" before Remus leave heat? the phrase 'sex marathon' comes to mind!
person Katie K
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I love Remus/Severus stories!! Especially this one!! Is Remus going to top? I hope so! Anyways, please update soon!!!
person Miepje
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still lmao and purring too ^^
A desperate Remus is a delicious Remus *blush*
And will Severus find out soon that Remus isn't "randomly" lusting after him, but that it is lurve... he needs some, badly ^^

Oh, and as for throwing Sirius out of a window? *grins* Go for it!