rate_review Reviews

I really like this story so far. Can't wait to read more!!!

weeeell....so far this story seems very interesting.
I have a feeling it's gonna turn out to be one of the best on the site.
now...hurry up and write some more chapters!!!!
~bob~

oooh yeah..........I STOLE YOUR REVIEW VIRGINITY!!!!
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *snickers*

Hey there! It's a good start. I'm not sure where you're going to go with it, given the relative brevity of the first chapter, but I'm interested. It's well written so far, which is always a plus. Since you're already estimating the length, I'm sure this is going to be a thought-through (is that even a legitimate phrase? :) work. Email me when you update, please? I want to know what's going to happen.

Good luck!
Avari

very good so far!!! You're characterization is done well so far. I can not wait until you're next update :)