rate_review Reviews

Good start... Give us some more.

i like it! much promise in this. you're writing is fine; there's nothing explicitly wrong with it. just be sure you indent whenever someone speaks. keep writing and updating!

interesting cant wait to see how it unfolds.

This looks very interesting. I like the way this has startee out. The way your building into everything. I can't wait till the next chapter, I hope you update soon. Please update soon.

its good so far cant wait to read more

This is a great start. Liked the prose style, good flow, natural dialogue, interesting premise. So far, your Draco is a believable mix of arrogant, weary and fragile. So few authors can establish that right away, if ever, so I'm suitably impressed. The last sentance, where you mentioned that he had to fight the urge to just curl up and cry, I loved that. Those little slips of fragility and humanity are what make anti-heros so compelling and probably what I love most about Draco-centered stories(well aside from his chemistry with Hermione, but that's a given.) Looking forward to your next update!!!

-Ara-

Pleas hurry up with the update! I want to read about arguments and supressed feelings :)

So far I love it. Can't wait to read more.

good start, please continue

You're off to a great start!! Please don't make it too long before the next chapter is up -- I can't wait!!