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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story idea. I can not wait for your next update :]
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Far. So good. What's the next act going to be, and who's got Hermione's eye, besides Dray?
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I think it's fantastic! You have me on the edge of my seat with anticipation. I better stop the drooling though, can't be good for the upholstery. lol! Anyways I will be reading. I like that you've decided to include the events of HBP. I myself have not yet worked up to that. Keep up the great and very in character work!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like your take on this! it's nice to see an upset hermione compared to what she would normally be. i like to see authors put their own spin on things and not be rowling remaking robots, good job and i can't wait for the next chapter i have a feeling this will end up in my top five! :)
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great premise for teh story so far, i cant wait to read more! keep up the great work and good luck!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work so far! So far with only one chapter I don't really have suggestions yet...but it is pretty good so far.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Update soon please.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool start. i like that he is in the head's room. but isn't one. it'll be interested to see how the others react to him.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh good start! And WTF? is a pariah?
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. Can't wait to see what happens next... hopefully some classic D/Hr moments lol nice work keep going!!