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by Eeyore9990

person Alison
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was awesome!
person Drake
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its sweet but i dont get it. did they die or something?
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is soo sad! Everytime I reread that I want to cry!
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good response to the challenge. i especially liked the way you brought the reader into the photograph, and then into the scene. the inclusion of the mirror-image of harry etc. extended the story of the photo nicely.