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for Embracing the Real Us

by SchtzFrytls

person scully
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, so DD is working with voldie? All right, i changed my opinion. kill both Voiide and DD! even better--have Voldie betray DD and kill him then Harry jump in and kill Voldie.
great chap, glad Harry saw that DD was working with Voldie so now they know to be extra careful.
one complaint: no deets on the Harry and Draco sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! argh!!!!! how could you do that to us loyal H/D shippers?!?! *pouts*
looking forward to the next chapter!
person jess
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
playing with elements, fun.

I think Dumbledor should be killed, probly Voldamort aswell.

If you keep Hermione around it could ither be explaned by Severous and Draco find out and work on a potion to heal her, or after destroying Voldamort Hermione calapses, Harry becomes despreat has someone get Madam Pompry whail he's holding a dieing Hermione she says somethimg to the effect of "Harry live happaly and Lilyla I wish I could spend forever with you" (K not that but you get the picture, Maybe something sarcastic) as she fades and Harry is all like "I wouln't let a stupid deformed cell take my bestfreinds life." and heals her with pure magic. *blink* that was alot .. whatever
person momoko
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes keep Hermione, maybe they should make a potion or a spell or both to cure cancer,

Alex, Alexandra, Momoko, Hotaru, Makoto, Fiore, Michael, Victor,

you decide who you kill, bye
person Night Shade
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really want Hermione to stay around, I suppose you could always make it that they all kill Voldemort and in doing so releasing Voldemorts power, giving it to the four and curing Hermione. I dunno about names...except I always loved the names Kovu(male) and Vitani(female). I don't care how you do it but PLEASE keep Hermione alive!!
person Nightwing
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the names Zack, Zara, Ebony, Matt...
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
person Demon Princess
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before I don0t know the names but I would like you to kill one Ronald and one Percy Weasly preferably by Voldie or Harry,and about Hermione, hmmm well i think the four of them should make something like the philosopher's stone or something like that. I hope that helpped some.
D.P.
person Nita
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyy cant wait for more
names- i like Corbin, zanisha
deaths- dumblefart, voldie, maybe ron?
'mione- after death of voldemort it could dissappear, explain it as a curse he had cast on her without them knowing, miracle cure?

anywayz im not very good with storyies just love readin them, even though i do write myself but never posted anywayz again, have fun writin
-Nita
person Night Shade
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon...I really do love this fic ^.~
person Storm
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I like it. Hmm along the lines of keeping Hermione, her recovery could have something to do with the four elements coming together and completing and bonding the four, healing her in the process. anyway great job and I can't wait to read more.
person Alison
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Names? I personally like Alison. =o) hee hee

Killed off? hmm.. Not too picky as long as it's not the main four.

Healing option? Maybe some special spell that only 4 elementals can perform together? ~shrug~ not to original but it's the best I've got. =o)