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for Embracing the Real Us

by SchtzFrytls

person thrnbrooke
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 8! Does it turn red? Bond as in have sex or bond as in the ceremony/ritual?
person bella
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
male names- Ty, Anothny, James, Jonathen, Co, Nikki, Ree. Gavlin, Ganymede, Danian
female names- Katherine, Celeste, Anna, Ginerva, Danica, Reene,


Hermoine should live. Her and Harry should became vampires, and their should be veela blood in the Malfoy line.
person sheedy
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The whole Herm's and Harry go Slytheryn is over done. That being said it is one of my favorite plot bunnies and yours is execellent. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing it with us,
person Nicole
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great updates. Are Layla and Hermione soul mates? I mean it would make sense since they make up the other half of the elements AND it would be the perfect excuse to miraculously heal Hermione....::cough:: lol. And James and Sev? Who knew?
person Ryu-chan
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! I loved at when Layla slapped Pansy!!!!BITCH SLAP!!!!lol
person momoko
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapters, bye
person lora
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seeing as this story is not finished, i get to comment. yay!!! so, dumbledore is evil, huh? he should die a slow and painful death in a face-off with harry. hermione needs to get better. some stray hex could cure her? a reverse of the avada kadevera? and lastly, i want some action from harry and draco.
person Mya Malfoy
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You've got me completely addicted. Here are the answers you were asking for:

1. I still need names, What are your favorite male and female names?
A: Male: Andrew or Jacob (even Jake for short!); Female: Elizabeth, Drucilla or Lily (depending on who it's for!).

2. Who do you want to see killed off?
A: Moldy Voldy, of course! Anyone who gets in our wizards/witches way, and, as dead last, Ron (he's too much fun to fuck with, usually, to kill him off outright!).

3. If I were to keep Hermione around....How do you think her recovery could be explained?
A: Have her bond to Layla and have it be an aftereffect of the bond. When they kill Voldy, have a huge amount of energy rush through her body and eradicate it, or even better, have Severus find a cure!!!

Those are all the ideas I can think of for right now... hope I helped!!!

Mya
person scully
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Names: um, Jackson (boy) and Ciel (girl--means 'sky' in french).
who die? no one i guess
hermione: heal her with a new potion snape invents specifically for whatever type of cancer she has that will only work with someone as air as their element. but please heal her--don't kill her off!
person chrisi
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
talk about rude, u gonna kill off hermione? if so i get her girlfriend