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for Embracing the Real Us

by SchtzFrytls

person Night Shade
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very niccce. ooh, poor harry; Veldemort better die painfully for thisss! can't wait till the next chapter ssso pleassse update sssoon.
person lita
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww..that was too cute!!!I loved the ending and also when Draco fainted. Please let Harry be able to see his and Draco's child grow. Please update ASAP!!!
person Amessis
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, they've got to stop Voldie's plan!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry cast a bubble? Is it only to protect the baby or will it keep Voldemort from him as well? Neec chapter 10!!!
person scully
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, really interesting chapter! i'm really curious as to the spells that voldie put on harry and how it did it through a vision. glad harry protected the baby tho. cant wait to see what draco's reaction is when he finds out he is going to be a daddy! update soon please!
person momoko
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
person Amessis
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how exciting!
person lita
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those were great chapters!! Please update asap!!
person amanda
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon
person alix
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK juat to let you know to fix the "formatting" STOP putting in that ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ or make it MUCH SHORTER then the formating will fix itself then we won't have to change the font to read the story....

This is a great story by the way and I am really enjoying it. I look forward to more updates. I feel bad about Hermione being sick I haven't read all the chapters posted yet so I will be finishing that after I post this. I just wanted to let you know how to fix the formatting since it seems to be giving you trouble. The reason it is doing that is because that ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ is so long with no spaces just make it much shorter and it will be ok.