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for Embracing the Real Us

by SchtzFrytls

person thrnbrooke
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh now they're really in danger! I need chapter 7! What happens next?
person morte
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's so cute. ^^ Is Hermione really going to die? ...That just sucks. ;-; Anyhoo...I think Bumblefuck should be...kissed! :o
Keep up the good work! ^^
person morte
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.s. - I agree with Night...It would be sooo much easier to read if it was like...word wrapped? I dunno..Its just hard to read with it making you have to scroll over to read it all..you know? ^^

-morte-
person Jess
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story glad I found it.

As for Dumbledor, Have his magic striped and him sent to an insane asaylam (like one of the really bad ones) or Tajuana Jail (rated the worst jail in to world)

Is it Dumbledor Voldamort is working for?

Guys names Deamon, Lestat, Leonardo, and Julius (I can't spell)
Girls names Rosalin, Jasmen, Heather, and Gianna
person megara1
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a slow painful death very painful. he should be caught in the act of lying, or in an attempt to kill either hermione, harry, or james.
person Elizabeth
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
girl names: Sophia (sophie) or Savannah or Malay
boy names: Tristen or Luke
person Tash
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one hell of an awsome story. i reckon that dumbledore should do something that makes everyone hate him and in the end harry ends up killing him. my fave guys name is carl and my fave girls name is brook.
person Demon Princess
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you ask me I think the Dementors should give him the kiss. I hade Dumbledore *mumbling under her breath somehing about manipulating old fools*
Well about the name: I don't have a clue. I'll let he others decide. That's all for now. Love ya, I'll love you even more if you update soon.
Bye

D.P.
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, this story is really good so far, but two things: one---draco and harry need to hurry the fuck up and at least kiss!!!! good gods, stop torturing us, please!!!! pretty please???
two--the end of the last chapter (5) confuses me. who is the man? who went to bed saying, yes hermione is a slytherin? dumbledore? and who is accusing hermione of not telling the truth about the man? clarify please! update soon!
person Nicole
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just found this story and I love it. I especially love the pairing. I can't wait for potions. AND I hope you don't kill of Hermione, that would suck for Layla, loosing her gf right after or soon after loosing her parents