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for Embracing the Real Us

by SchtzFrytls

person Dawn
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Hermionie should live and you could blame it on the magic of the elements
person chrisi
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well its interesting so far and i love a bad harry and hermione as much as the next but i havent yet understood why they changed and i say u have awsome choice in clothing and music, ok well harry has awsome taste in music, rob zombies dragula is one of my faves. i want the collar harry has, id wear it instead of the black dog collar i have thast has a tag with spoilt inscribed in it.
person Alison
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Soul Mates! Perfect! =o) Now... about Hermione's cancer problem...... ;o)

Great chapter! Please udpate soon! =o)
person chrisi
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo gotta love it, wish i was there, id steal hermione lol, now all we need is draco or harry to do a pole dance and everything would be right in the world
person Ryu-chan
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. I loved that letter Harry wrote the Dursleys!LOL!!!!
2.Hermiones middle name is Jane( although its a given that Constance sounds better)
3. Why OH WHY did you not get one of them to have a nipple ring????? Every lover likes playing with a nipple ring --.<
4.Three tatoos would deffinatly take longer then 3 hours even if they were really tiny-and whats up with Hermiones bat thing?
* goes back to reading*
person Tash
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fave girls name is brooke and fave guys name is carl . i think that dumbledore should be killed off and i think that pro. snape shuld know about hermiones cancer and work hard to make a cure for her cause she is with his godsons cousin........Tash
person lita
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Dumbledore should be given the kiss. And as for a girl name: Ebony/Paris/Hazel and a boy name: Chris/Jason.
person scully
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i just read and reviewed and instantly there was another chapter up! how cool is that???
im glad hermione finally told layla.
and i am super glad that harry and draco are going to have sex! i hope we get lots of juicy details in the next chapter!!!
person vblum12
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey I love this story! And I totally think that Dumbledore should get the demetors kiss! That would just be the best revenge! also my favorite boys name is Dom. and my fav girls name is cora
person Markie
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this fic. It's a lot of fun to read. I, personally, think that Dumbledore should be put somewhere more protected than Azkaban. If Lucius and Bellatrix can escape, then Dumbledore can escape. Maybe they should throw him through the veil...? As for names, I like Alex and Kerry for either boy or girl.