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ACK! You MUST update! I love it!

wow! really, that is amazing writing. I was shaking in my seat, just from reading it. Severus is so damn scary! You bring out his dominance awesomely. I would be terrified if i were in Hermione's position. I'd be probably running for the hills. I love the way you have written this, since not many fanfic writers have written so deeply into Snape's feelings sexually. You just don't see it written this amazingly brilliant! I can't WAIT until the next chapter, hopefully no anticlimaxes? Harry and Ron better shove off!
well, i'd better let you get on with it!

wow...it's so weird that Dumbledore knows....
ech....it's like ur grandpa watching you fuck.

*SQUEE!* I'm positively giddy! I can't WAIT for the next chapter. *Sigh* Snape is such an evil bastard; it's great.

omg---u r such a mean person...but I loved it chr chr...could send me an email when u update?!

more more more! mmm....sev is deliciously dark....

An interesting story with some elements that make it unreadable for me. For example, the idea that its OK to rape a witch who's over the legal age of consent - because what you are describing is rape. If Hermoine won't agree to it without threatening to kill her cat that doesn't sound too consentual to me. Dumbledore can't protect a student from being raped because she's overage? Even though Dumbledore knows she is not consenting and that Snape is threatening her? And these are the good guys! I can't find any pleasure in reading about a magical world in which women, once they reach 17 are available for being raped by any faculty member and have no protection from violent predators while they are in school. Having been a victim of sexual harrasment by a teacher in a school setting it turns my stomach, even in fan fiction. Sorry.

perhaps you should try another website until March 1st...restricted section or ashwinder perhaps ?

fantastic story....i love all the hot language too, it adds just the right amount of spice to the story. Awaiting the next installment is going to be hell, but its worth it. Keep up the fabulous work!

Regards,
AR

He is soooo mean!!! I