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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow a rough Severus, really sexy. When you update would you PLEASE let me know???
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wowza...u rock! thats some seriously hot stuff! update please!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you back at work :)
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi a_reader, yep im back :) was on a travelling spree and kinda got carried away. hopefully i will be able to get back in track with the plot and keep it going. and i intend to keep it going at all cost. lol. thanks for revieweing. :)
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have read most of this before and I hope you give it an ending since it has been a very long,long time since you updated this story. I really wish she could get revenge on him some how. To see her get even with him would be great! Also is this just going to be another story where he is a jerk to her through the whole thing and then the story ends with him being a jerk and nothing more. So far I was hoping she would be a lot stronger and kick his ass!!!!! I will keep reading in the hopes she can make him feel the same kind of pain she is going through. To make him feel vonerable in a way, to make him feel weak, and that there is no other choice he could make.
She seems like she has the courage to stand up to him, use her mind,magic to show that she isn't as weak as he things she is. I know she likes him but it seems he is just a user and nothing more. If you killed him or hurt him right now I wouldn't even blink an eye because the way he has treated her like she just some kind of fuck toy is well in a way sad. You did a very good job with the characters but th way he is acting it seems if she was in trouble he wouldn't lift a finger to save her life. That he cares for nothing and that he is just saving his own ass. I did like how you had the whole cat and mouse thing going on but along the way it started to turn into something more.... I will just leave it at that. It has potental to be a great story but in less you finish it that last page would be the end of the story.
She seems like she has the courage to stand up to him, use her mind,magic to show that she isn't as weak as he things she is. I know she likes him but it seems he is just a user and nothing more. If you killed him or hurt him right now I wouldn't even blink an eye because the way he has treated her like she just some kind of fuck toy is well in a way sad. You did a very good job with the characters but th way he is acting it seems if she was in trouble he wouldn't lift a finger to save her life. That he cares for nothing and that he is just saving his own ass. I did like how you had the whole cat and mouse thing going on but along the way it started to turn into something more.... I will just leave it at that. It has potental to be a great story but in less you finish it that last page would be the end of the story.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!
please keep updating!
Severus is so in character.. just perfect... I like him nasty ;)
very good story
please keep updating!
Severus is so in character.. just perfect... I like him nasty ;)
very good story
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man! you have to update soon before I go nut's Pleaseeeeee,
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg please write some more! This is a really good story that NEEDS to be finished!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg snape is such a bastard