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for All of a sudden

by panicog

person Edania
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now thats what i called going in for the kill! I see a game of snake and lion being played out, YES! Now thats what i like and don't see often in some stories, yes baby! ohhh i wish i was her at this moment lol. I wonder, well snape block it, or take the hit, maybe get knocked, but gets back but even more pist! Ah i say she should make him more mad, the more the better!, ( but not mad enough to hurt to much ( as in killing her) But leaving her very sore in the monring lol Anyway its coming alot great! Snape is such a animal, i wish my man was like that!
person amsev
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, but I hope that that "stupify" actually worked on Snape! I hope she ties him to his bed and has HER way with him! (There just aren't enough bondage!Severus stories out there!!)
person Marik_Lover (To lazy to sign in.)
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon. PLEASE!!!
person Mr. Moosey
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just like Snape can't hardly wait for his detention with Miss Granger, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good job. I adore Evil!Snape, and I DO think that he would dance over her dead body when she died. I just really hope that you don't end this fic with him some how falling in love with her. THAT WOULD RUIN EVERYTHING! After all, what good is the mudblood Granger, but a Gryffindor Whore? *Smirk* Update. Soon.
person Tabitha
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you want to make it more interesting...have her win the day...
person Kris
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so evil. I LOVE IT! XD
person poppy
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That's a bad Snape!!
person SnapesPet30
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...no I guess that wouldn't be what she excepted but she in her fogged mind just attacked a teacher. Holy smokes this is getting good.
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT HERMOINE!!!!!!! You just don't do that to Snape. It makes him very rough and unforgiving. Submit to your detention like a good girl and let him fuck you six ways from sunday. hehehehe

Ithilin
person Denise
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 6: wow. i like the chp! very cliff...so the next chp BETTER be on any moment. lol