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for All of a sudden

by panicog

person Anonymous
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I  so confused. Wasn't she going to show him that he had to treat her better? And what's with her suddenly thinking he isn't so bad. He literally hit her and spanked her for no reason. It's like her minor went from having a brain and personality to being some abused house wife. It went from a story to literally just snaps fucking her. This makes no sense whatsoever. I was enjoying it up until the last few chapters. 

person James
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
garbage with a capital G.
person Excalibur
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loooove your work! Your one of my favorite authors. Please make more chapters please!
person hotgoose
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really hot so far, I ca't wait to see what exactly has caused this sudden change of attitude. Please update soon
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IS THERE AN END TO THIS STORY??
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IS THERE A UPDATE? I LOVE THIS STORY.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT DONT STOP
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Rainaangel
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story - your snape is wonderful (in a dark, dangerous way of course ;) ) Would love it if you updated but if you're not working on it anymore then thank you anyway for writing it in the first place :)
Thank you!!!
person marcia
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can never have enough dark Severus stories. I can't wait to see what happens next. I did feel that allowing him to use her cat as blackmail was a bit much. I mean really it was just a cat. I do recognize, however, that it was merely an excuse for her to let him in. But still a cat?