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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooow
very interesting idea :)
o And I very interesting to see how poor Albus will be suppressed by his lemon drops if him to tell what his father with Sev has maked
:) lol :)
very interesting idea :)
o And I very interesting to see how poor Albus will be suppressed by his lemon drops if him to tell what his father with Sev has maked
:) lol :)
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting is Voldy dead olredy and this happend on his death
or he still a life and done it for snap out from HP and SS ???
(I mean send them in time)
or he still a life and done it for snap out from HP and SS ???
(I mean send them in time)
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg this story is so cool! And you take do so many things with it! I hope Dumbledore finds out about Harry and that leads him to free the slaves. I hope I didn
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are going to continue this!!! The concept you've posited has me intrigued and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and original plot!
I hope you'll update soon!
Just a thing: in chapter 5 you write about Sev having a shower, if I'm not wrong, but isn't a shower improbable for the years the story is set?
Wouldn't be more appropriate a bath?
I know it's a stupid issue, I just had to ask!
I hope you'll update soon!
Just a thing: in chapter 5 you write about Sev having a shower, if I'm not wrong, but isn't a shower improbable for the years the story is set?
Wouldn't be more appropriate a bath?
I know it's a stupid issue, I just had to ask!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a delightful read :-) I giggled right from chatper 1 until the last chapter you have writen. truly delightful.
I have no idea how I could have missed this fic for as long as I have.
I hope you update regularly.
thank you for the great read.
I have no idea how I could have missed this fic for as long as I have.
I hope you update regularly.
thank you for the great read.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm thankful that some of the toys are for Severus' pleasure too. I just hope that they have to show the Master/Slave relationship fairly soon.
Excellent chapter!
Thank you.
Excellent chapter!
Thank you.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry, had to review again after I read Astas comment. You being north american or slavery being abolished at 1826 in europe, is inconsequensal to this fic and it's plot. It's just a year and who say's muggle and wizarding law go hand in hand? If your going technical over it, wizards are still using slavery but with house elfs. So your story line is very probable. I hope you don't take Astas comment to heart and rewrite the story or anything. This is a slave fic and a readlly good one at that. Keep it so :-)
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really a very nice story!!! It
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, I have really enjoyed it. Update soon.