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It's AU, it isn't supposed to be 'true to history'. No one is standing there with a wand at your head making you read!!! I, for one, am greatly enjoying this story. Can't wait for Harry to try out the new toys. Thanks Taran!!!!!!

Taran, I love this story. I write as well, and generally only write AU. Don't let that twatwaffle's comment bug you. I have seen some stuff that has made me want to write the author and ask them to share their drugs. I am not going to go on about that ijit though, they can simply read elsewhere.

As for updating quickly....do it when you can. I have arthritis that keeps me from using my hands much of the time, so since the weather's gotten cold my readers have gone from once a day postings to once every 7-10 days. We adapt, and if you have us hooked, we will wait with baited breath for the next morsel.

All that being said...keep up the lovely work when you can and don't let the twatwaffles ruin your day.

Thanks for updating!!! And don

Thanks for the update, I will take them when I can.

Don't let the oft' huffy/picky readers get you down, dear-heart. Fanfiction is meant to be taken with a grain of salt, and anyone with the audacity to criticize so harshly should be equally prepared to present their own work up for the scrutiny of their "peers". Let's not forget that "constructive criticism" is meant to encourage and help the author/artist. Flaming and bashing is both horridly rude and disappointingly juvenile.

I, for one, enjoy the challenging AU you've set out to create, and admire your tenacity in pursuing such a difficult plot. If the characters are a bit OOC, it is only something that can be improved with time and practice.

Don't even bother with the words of one so willing to hurt rather than help, for they are worthless. I do hope your health improves, and the empty grumblings of the uptight sticklers bother you no longer.

I was so waiting for an update that when I saw it i jumped happily like a little Dobby!!!
The more I read it the more I like it! And seeing I liked it from the beginning it says much! ;P
I just fear the fact that probably it would take a while and some more chapters to get to the hot part, but it fits! sob!

As for that horrible review you got, I can't really see how what it says should matter in this contest, even if all of it was true (maybe I'm just ignorant but I never heard about a coordination of wizarding and muggle laws), this is a fanfic!
Fantasy is involved!

But then I got this bad feeling that maybe you could have taken my observation about the shower, as a similar reprimand, and I felt so bad!!!
As I said it was just a silly clarification, just something that I noted, and.... ok I confess... I noted it just because I was thinking something along the line of:

Harry: "Sev? you'd better join me before the water turns hot!"
(No they can't heat it with magic! where would be the fun in that?)
Sev: "Master....I don't think...."
Harry: "JOIN ME!"
Sev: "I won't..."
*collar tightening*
*sev accomplishing the command*
Flustered Harry: "I m-meant in the tub!"

;PPP
oooops, sorry! got carried away!!!
this is YOUR story!

Well, I like all your stories mistakes or not! Some were just born to be assholes, usually covering their own faults! Constructive critics are ok but flames are just cowards.

I've just discoverd yous story and think it's really, really good! I really like Dom Harry and Sub Sev, and there are so little stories!! Please update soon!!

Love, Smilingcat

Cliffie!!!!
What a place to stop!!!!!
Sounds interesting. What are they going to see in the bar????

Great story, I tend to avoid master/slave ficts because I am not a big fan of angst, however this one is to funny! Snape complaining about wearing red is a great touch, write more soon!