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I really love this fic! A++++++++++++++

Drayan starts contemplating all the possible meanings of the word commotion. I must admit that you've triggered some curiosity. I look forward to seeing more development with all OCs in future chapters. Just keep writing.

D. Potter

Now, i really don't review that often (yes, being a writer i know that is bad) but i find this story to be very interesting. I like how you have the characters and you hit to the books by using Malfoy and Dumbledor, not just taking the names and ideas to make your own story. And no matter what that one review said i do have to say this a nicely writen fanfic and at least I do not expect you to be perfect. As far as posting... again, i do write and post so... just get them as fast as you can.

I love it, keep going.

This is a pretty interesting story. It's different, being set in a different time and all. And kudos to you for telling off that person. Who reads fanfiction looking for historical correctness anyway? I think it's a great story and I can't wait to read more. Hope you get better soon!

I read the other reviewer about slavery and how inaccurate your setting and just had to laugh. Obviously you touched a sore spot for that person but her criticism about historical accuracy was rather silly considering the fandom. I\'ll give just one example why I think so.

In Chamber of Secrets JKR has the entrance to the chamber hidden in the girls lavatory. Now I\'m far from the history expert but I know that indoor plumbing didn\'t exsist prior to the 1800s. Even the Roman baths didn\'t have that kind of running water, flush toilets, sinks etc. So we\'ve got a castle built in about 1000 AD by the founders one of which decides to hide the entrance to his chamber in a bathroom? A bathroom that wouldn\'t have exsisted for another 1850 years -- at least in the style shown. Not to mention that fawcets wouldn\'t have lasted a thousand years. You couldn\'t even argue for a remodel because the plumbing necessary to create a bathroom would have revealed the entrance. Not to mention that the snake on the sink that was necessary to open the chamber had to be set up by a parselmouth. And the legend attributes the chamber to Slytherin. So trying to apply realism to HP just doesn\'t work.

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! you must continue!!! Don't let any, thoughtless flamers stop you! (yeah i know some reviews can be cutting and sting quiet a bit >_<) There are so many others who love your fic! YAY!!! Like me!

So please continue and update again soon!

*Offers slave Snape cookies*

Oh, I feel smut comming up!

I like this. I love this type of slavefic. As for that review you quoted in the latest chapter - yes you're OOC and historically in-accurate (I personally think you'd have been better setting it in the eighteenth century) but you covered all of that right at the beginnning by labelling it an 'AU'. So I'm perfectly happy with it all and will be checking back to read any updates :)

Wow I love your story! Oh and on what Asta said those are the people you have to learn to ignore. Mostly because the hole 'unrealistic' thing.... cuz wizards are just a normal day occurance, never mind the fact that you got a date or two mixed up.

Asta if your reading this go get some help and stop making other people's lives difficult because you have a problem with thier work. You don't have to flame someone's work just because they got a date wrong, its rude.

~Dragonfly~