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for Hogsmeade, Circa 1826

by TaranSwann

person toads70
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved ch 3 as well , but its 1am here so i'm off to bed , can't wait to read the rest of this story :)
person toads70
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 4&5 - typical malfoy--pompus jerk , if they weren't so beautiful i'd hate them ... i'm so shallow lol. when you had harry push sev's face in the food i started laughing that was too funny for harry to do to prof snape (i can just see the retaliation from sev when they get back) wow ch 5 was good are you going to mention what malfoy is looking for? and i like that harry and sev seem to respect and trust each other its nice :)
person toads70
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just read chapter one- i can tell this is going to be a good story , i'd love for sev to be my slave :)
person Makovaso
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
person Mist
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::waits impatiently for update::
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this and am still waiting with bated breath for an update. please please pretty please
person smoidel
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I found the "diatribe" from the reviewer you shared with us at the beginning of the chapter amusing. It is obvious the reviewer neglected to check on just when slavery was abolished legally (as opposed to falling out of favor) in England and Europe.

In England slavery was abolished in January 1, 1808 by act of Parliment. In France slavery was not abolished until 1833, and not until 1850 in its North American colonies.

So assuming the Wizarding England paralleled its Muggle counterpart - there is nothing wrong with the 1826 setting of your story.

Good story so far, I look forward to reading the rest.
person Veronica
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated this is truly one of my favorite stories. Did I pick up on forshadoing in the chapter the 'death' might be Severus!?
person Mie
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this and would love to see it's conclusion please if you could tellme when you have updates.
person indifferent nobody
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like your story, i like even more that snape's a slave. the toys are lovely, hopefully you'll use them soon. please update