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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good plot. Please continue
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fun beginning!!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings,
I like it so far, hope you keep writing.
I can't wait to see where this plot line goes. And how they put anything on their naked selves with their hands bound together. I guess it will have to be swish & flick.
I like it so far, hope you keep writing.
I can't wait to see where this plot line goes. And how they put anything on their naked selves with their hands bound together. I guess it will have to be swish & flick.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very funny plot....Draco's mother is a mess! I hope you update soon and often don't give up on the story it sounds like it's going to be original and super funny! Good luck!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really interesting. im confused but im sure that will be fixed with more chapters
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, but you might want to think about getting a beta. In some places, you switched from first person to third person and it was a bit confusing. Other than that, I love it. Can't wait to read more.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see where this is going. It looks like it's going to be a fun read! I hope you update this soon.