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by RDWind

person hup
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i've been considering doing a story about a combined orphanage with Magical Creatures who are dangerous to others in one part and humans, wizards, non conventional magic users and various other magical creatures. i won't be using most of the main cast and hope to not have to deal with Harry, Ron or Hermione in any fashion except anonymous benefactors. any advice would be great.
person Muffin
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i dont know what happend in this chapter but i was totaly in to it till now ill keep reading but i think the whole buffy thing fucked it up :(
person SpiritOfBeyond
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing. probably the best i've ever read on AFF. its got incredible cliffhanger (i love them!) crazy twists, and descriptions so perfect i can see it all happen. i read all 49 chapters in about a day. i was hooked and i can't wait to read the sequel. truth be told, there aren't enough words to say how amazing this story is. thank you for that, i loved and enjoyed every minute of my reading it.

Spirit
person l'etje
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good, this story was amazing, god you are a very very good writer
i hope you will write something els.keep writing and posttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
bye bye
person MarzBar
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and read it straight through. Thanks for the wonderful yarn.
person angel
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a great story i love it and the endding how the when to scool in texas.... i cant wait in till your next story in till then later for now

angel
person ShadowLily
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to thank you for writing this story and posting for us all to read. I felt it was very well written and it was a privledge to read it. I checked every day sometimes twice a day waiting in anticipation for the next chapter. I'm glad that I found this story. Thank you.....
person RotFlamme
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, that was great!! Are you working on a sequal?
person angel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
who who is coming to the party .... please please update soon i would love to read more ... and to bad severus die .... please more ...later for now

angel
person ShadowLily
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh please please please update.....cliffhangers suck majorly.......hurry.......