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for Why Do You Love Me?

by CBeta

person Banner
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At last!
We're away from THEM.
person MedicNinM
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! TT_TT abused at home. friends not beliving him/knowing that wasn't him. And Draco taking his presents! Life is cruel!!!
*sniffles* I hope someone finds out about the raping/abuse... and 'takes care of' Dursely!!
AND i hope that same someone... *coughDRACOcough* also takes care of Harry! ...but in a good way! wait, that doesn't sound quite right...
^_^
anyways I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more!
Keep up the good work, and hope you update soon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 5! Draco did it as a joke? Oh if he only knew what harm he had caused! Oh I need more!
person Bookworm51485
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Draco is a little prick isn't he. He doesn't realize what he really did, if he hadn't come then they probably would have gone to get Harry, though he is right, though should have been able to tell that that wasn't him. Somehow that reminds me of those episodes of Charmed when one of the sisters gets replaced by somebody and they never figure it out until the person reveals themself or the sister who's kidnapped escapes. I've never gotten that, if you supposedly know a person so well, you should know when they aren't acting normal. I've been having trouble with some authors I've sent reviews too lately because they don't like what I write, but I like to test the water a bit with each new author so I'm going to just do what I normally do. I like the storyline and I hope to see Vernon get his soon. And with all the injuries that Harry has that seems likely. In one of the stories I'm betaing, the main character is raped and one of the ways they figure it out is that he had some tearing in his intestinal wall that caused a severe infection. So combined with all the cuts on his back and being raped, I could definitely see Harry getting a really bad infection and having to do to a mediwitch/wizard who will see that he's been raped. That especially seems more of a possibility after that comment that you have at the end of the chapter where Arthur tells him that he looks peaky, I could see that being the beginning of a fever. Anyways I'm going to stop now because I have a test tomorrow and I have to go to bed so I can get up early to do some studying. I hope that I didn't upset you like I seem to upset other authors when I try to predict (or maybe even slightly influence:D) the outcome of the story. I don't get why it upsets them so much, they could just ignore me, but oh well. Love your story and I hope to see an update soon.
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm scared. these people are evil.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 4! Poor Harry! Dudley tried to help Harry but he could have done more. He could have stopped his dad. Why would someone impersonate Harry unless they wanted Harry punished. I wouldn't be surprised if his "gifts" turned up at Hogwarts so he had "proof" he was at the party.
person Alison
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Poor Dudley... he was just trying to help a guy out. Great chapter. Please update soon. =o)
person scully
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very dark, very interesting. will be interesting to see where this goes once harry finally gets the hell out of that house! i hope voldie kills vernon and petunia--dudley has redeemed himself, hopefully he'll be away at school when voldie comes to kills hi parents! please let arthur and co. finally believe harry. how can they not when they see him? it would be impossible! i wonder how draco is going to fit into all this as well. look forward to your updates!
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and I hope that you update soon!! How in the world could Harry have showed up?? Please make this better!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
person Alison
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Poor Harry! I hope his head wound isn't too bad!