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you got some talent hun i must say i just finished reading this but i'll keep checking up eh? that bloody aunt should die and burn in hell *cough* whore *cough*
if your not to busy just send the site via e-mail and i'll take a gander. keep it up!
J.

was not sure if u could see my e-mail....wisepyro360@yahoo.com

this is a very very good story but it is so slow, i mean let droco and harry come together and llet harry heal, let draco help him heal.
it is so sad to see him like this. keep going and post soon
bye bye

Were is draco?
Is this realy a draco+harry story?

Poor Harry! Need chapter 6! Why didn't Hermione try to cancel the "glamour" while he slept? So she's starting to realize that Harry wasn't there. I hope she figures it out soon. Harry needs help!

I always love getting responses to reviews I send, especially when they're positive. I thought the idea was good too, though I can't take credit for it. It all goes to the author I'm betaing for. She actually just finished the story and posted the unbetad chapters. It's from the Naruto fandom, though it's AU so it's not really necessary to have any knowledge of the series. It's called "Just another day in paradise" by Arora. She's pretty good at making things gory and angsty. If your interested you could read her other story too, though that one needs some knowledge of the story to understand what's going on. Now on to your story. I do try to make an effort to put a little more than "I like your story, please continue" and I also try to give real criticism, so I'm glad you appreciate it. I'm not sure how much I can give you this time around though. Somehow lately I've been having trouble getting good reviews out. But here goes. I liked this new chapter, though I was a bit disappointed in Hermione. She's like super genius girl, she should have made the connection between the party and the glamour and the letter by now. Though I guess by all that scribbling she was doing at the end, she's making the connection, maybe she's just trying to make sure before she says anything. And Ron, well he's just hopeless isn't he. Well either that or he subconciously realizes that something is wrong but he doesn't want to deal with it. Though I'd think it's more he's just a little slow:D I guess I can understand the whole people change thing, I should. I have a friend who made like a 180 switch over a short period of time, she went from an obsessively studious bookworm to an obsession with shoplifting and piercings and guys. So yea, I can see that. Though I still think that they should have at least questioned it a bit, especially after they got that letter and being in the world they are in where people can imitate another without too much effort. And about the idea influencing the story, that would be cool. That's the reason I passed it on. Anyways that's all I got for you today, have to get up early tomorrow. Hope to see an update soon and to see what kind of influence the idea had. And I hope you like the story, I think it's really well-written, it just has a few spelling problems I haven't gotten rid of yet in the chapters before I started and in the later ones.

Wow! Why doesn't Hermione just ask Mr/Mrs Weasley to remove the glamour that she's sure he's wearing??? =o) Great chapter! Please update soon.

I am soo enjoying this story!! I so can't wait for the next chappy!!! Your doing a great job on the story. Update ASAP!!!

I just have so many questions after that chapter that I'm just going to have to beg you to update REALLY QUICKLY to see if the next chap covers some.

Pretty please???????? =o)

poor harry. now i'm interested in this other money and house. please update soon.