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for The Deceit Of A Lifetime

by GenesisBoi21

schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is really good so far! hard for me to see how draco is going to end up WITH harry in this one. the only clue is the "get close to Potter" instructions--but that could mean anything. stories set away from Hogwarts at other wizarding school always intrigue me, so i am very interested in seeing where yours goes. good writing so far, wtih very few grammar/spelling/syntaz mistakes--thank you for that! it is so much easier and more enjoyable to read a story that isn't so full of errors that you have to re-read everything twice just to figure out what is going on! hope you update soon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 10! So things are in place. Why was Dumbledore smiling? What does he know or have planned?
person Alison
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is Dumbledore responsible for sending Draco too? Who's the TA? Snape? hee hee =o)
person Alison
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please update soon! =o)
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 9! What happens next?
person Banner
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great setup. I always thought that the school regents would have had Harry removed he is the cause of high risk to the rest of the student body. ( I guess JKRowling didn't want to start over from the beginning with a new school.)