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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful character development, and the writing skills are superb. I'm going to guess that the "Manchester lass" is the OFC in this story?
Nicely done so far!
Nicely done so far!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Great chapter! Can't wait to find out what Severus does to Bella. Loved the line "On my terms" gave me the shivers. *grins*
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT second chapter. I love the background information on Snape's childhood.
Can't wait for what happens next between him and Bella!!
Can't wait for what happens next between him and Bella!!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sod the mother and her sister. The beginning was good.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a spell-binding beginning! You've got your readers hooked from the first paragraph.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked good start! I can't wait to read more. Excellent job!