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for Weremouse

by swirly

person zafaran
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sleep-Aid Potion isn't original, but it does fit the standard naming conventions of the Wizarding World. You do have some like Amortentia that are on a Latin base, but most of the standard ones are named in Standard English by function like Dreamless Sleep or Skele-Gro or, in a slightly more archaic language form that suggests it is a much older formula, Draught of Living Death. The Wizarding World doesn't have all the competition between drug/pharmaceutical companies where you've got basically fourteen dozen different names and formulas for the same medication (although that does have some advantages in real life. One of my meds I have a problem with the brand-name version based on the United States Pharmacopeia formulation, but I can tolerate the British Pharmacopeia version made by Glaxo-Germany to the point that I've lost some side-effects that have persisted through multiple types of the medication--natural and synthetic--for thirty years.) I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters (on all your incomplete stories) sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
person zafaran
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phooey, I ran out of chapters to read. {snicker} I love this story, and can't wait to find out what happens next. I've been reading it all in one sitting, and was hoping all the chapters were here so I'd find out what the end was. I'm probably going to come back sometime and save this to my hard drive so I can convert it to ebook so I can reread it on my PDA. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
person Ravens23
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please have Sev. find about the baby and the rest of the school
person NightLo
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As Harry is endowed with four, when will Snape (to be precised - Remus?) has one? And how will Harry tell others about the feeding? As now I am sunk into this, please update soon!
person Vittani
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i think Sev is gonna hav a fit. Aaaaawwww, very cute. Please update soon.
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Can't wait to read more.
person yuk!!
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soooo fucking weird for my taste
i mean really weird
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 46! He's going to have to tell them about Cleo!
person Varjo
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. A bit short maybe, but that's ok.
person butterpie
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, looks like I was right, but what will happen when Draco and the others find out about Jasmine. Also how will Ron and Hermione react to their daughter being part weremouse? Don't stop now.