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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad. not bad at all. It's allright I guess. Anyway when you get the chance to update please do. Later. K15
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic...love the plot line and how you didn't just throw Hermione and Draco together. Nice...very nice
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story...
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i loved it you did a great job! Please update soon! You really are such a wonderful imaginative writter! :)
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me again sorry, but i didn't catch any comma problems or anything it was easy for me to read but then again i was so into it i could have missed it, lol well anyway keep up the great job! i love it!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Update soon please.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it. it's a new twist to the whole draco/hermione thing. update soon! email me when you do please!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was very good. You have nothing to be worried about. I really like how Pansy's trying to get Draco turned onto Hermione. It's such the opposite of what is usually written about those two.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot to this story. I just have one request though. Some of the story doesn't make sense due to lack of commas. It makes it really hard to read and would be better if you had better grammar.
I like the story and will continue reading it, just add commas where appropriate, please.
Temptress~
I like the story and will continue reading it, just add commas where appropriate, please.
Temptress~