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i had the same idea for the paper.nice story

your story is hysterical! I really hope that you update soon, because now I am extreamly curious about what will happen between Hermione and Draco, as well as if Pansy will every tell Milton! Great story though!!! Until next time!

that chapter was very entertaining! i loved it! this story is really fastly moving it's way up my list of favs! i love everything really there isn't a certain part to point out. but this last chapter made me laugh, good job and exicution. update soon i love the cliffy as long as it doesn't last long lol!

Very nice "breaking point" chapter, though it seems like it could use a little more description to highten the emotions even more. For example, simply remarking on how Draco or Hermione are standing, seething, glaring, the hot or cold feelings etc, would create a steamier unresolved sexual tension that you have going. Of course, as the reader, we can always plug that stuff in on our own, but it's more interesting when the author gives us exactly what they're seeing in their head for the scene. I'm enjoying the more mature Pansy and the forgiving nature that you keep Hermione in. Sometimes it seems a little too mature (since I remember very clearly all the stupid reactions I had as a teen from the massive amounts of hormones), but then you throw in spats and other things that balance their age nicely. Thank you for the notice about the update! I await your next chapters, yay! (oh and you did fine on the girl/girl action, made it seem very plausible, so grats!)

I wonder if she's gonna tell him tha truth... But i hope you post soon so i can see what happens between Hermonie and Draco...

I LOVE this story. Don't ever stop writing it! Please please please update!

that was one of the best girl on girl bits i have ever read! i am so glad you have finally updated it's been like 6 months or something lol i love this and please please update this soooooon!

I love it! Girl on girl action doesn't usually do much for me, but that last chapter was great. I Can't wait for you to continue. Will Pansy will be caught? hmmm. Don't leave us hanging for too long!

Oh-oh! Pansy silence is sometimes the better part of valour! This may not be the time to tell all! LOL That chapter was great! I loved their argument...so childish! hahahahahahaha

loving it update soon please