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hey huh, so sorry it took me so long everytime i'd get on someone would call, lol. so i love it so much it's so awesome! don't worry i am not let down at all, better than i thought it'd be, great job!( and i am a big fan, lol) honestly i really had no problems with reading this, of couse i am not the sharpest lol. anyway so i think you write awesome and are very creative. i was so into it that i have no idea if there was anything wrong with the grammar. but again i am not an expert. all i know is that i am so glad you wrote this, and i enjoyed every word so far. i can't wait for the next chapter! i finally get to read what happens (my choice i know) but please put the next chapter up what are you waiting for it's done! lol so... i feel somewhat bad for that review, i know you aren't bothered by it. it's just well i don't really get it i guess. i do with the grammar, but if you get that worked out (i didn't see any mistakes just going by what you said)then there is nothing wrong at all, this was wonderful. i hope i am making it clear i feel like i need you to know how good you are. i guess what i am trying to say is mistakes are mistakes but they can be fixed they're just technical but if you can't write then you just don't have it no matter how good your grammar is. and honey trust me you have it. from the bottom of my heart i mean it no smoke blowing. i promise. so anyway luv yah and can't wait for more. i am so hooked. kisses my friend. :)

This is wonderful. If this is you not putting all your effort in I'd like to see what you come up with when you do. Hope you plan to continue cuz I am thoroughly hooked.

oh gettinng soooo goodd i hope u continnue soon ttyl

I LOVE IT!

- Sam

Getting better and better!

that chapter was so fun! i didn't stop smiling even once through the whole thing. i chuckled out loud so much and when it got to the i guess it was the boiling point i was the edge of my chair, so exciting can't wait for an update! i really really love this story! update as fast as you did this one please! i wonder how milton will take it!

Wow! But did you have to leave us on such a cliffie? And wow... that interaction between Draco and Hermione... Love it ;) Can't get enough of it lol. I can't wait for the next one :D

I was under the impression that this was an adult fanfiction website. I thought that members and visitors must (or should...) be 18 years of age or older. One would think then, considering that the majority of those on the site are over 18 (and apparently attending or graduated from a post-secondary institution), we would be MORE critical of the quality of the stories submitted for our reading pleasure. One would think that as we are, for the most part, over the age of 18, we would have an idea of what technically sound writing would be. One would also think that as we are so educated and would then be accustomed to academic writing, we could not honestly leave a review for this story and not comment on the frequency of grammatical errors. One must also hypothesize that as we seem to so educated, we would have SEEN those errors as we read the story.

I would also think that as an educated group, having read the first 7 chapters and believing that they had been beta read and still managed to have sentences like "Oh um sorry I had a bit of something in my throat I

Of all the rotten times to walk back into the room. LOL Loved the chapter and your story is not boring or crap by any means. You keep going because I and many others will keep on reading. I'm so glad this site is back online. Talk about serious withdrawals. :)

oh man just when it was getting really good Pansy and milton had to ruin it! oh well i'm sure there will be other chances...great story u have here...update soon plz