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for In the Closet

by bellgirl

person Natalie
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS THE SECOND TIME YOU'VE DONE THIS! what wrong with you?!?!?!!?!? lol write soon!
person Namilie
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe That's Great ! Hope You'll Coninue soon... Hate to wait to long ;)
person bellgirl
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gracie,

Oh my gosh!! lol I completely forgot to mention that my beta is on vacation for two weeks. So he didn't get to go over this. I didn't want everyone to wait that long. I figured that he could help when he got back. It was late last night and I forgot to write that in my autor's note. Thanks for reminding me. Perhaps if you are interested maybe you could oh ... be my beta for this chapter and the next (which is the last). You don't have to it's just my writing is a mess and I feel bad for making others read it. lol :) Thanks!!
person mona
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting so exciting!!!!! why did he get mad a leave? what happened after she went out to get him? oh cliffhangers!!!! two in a row!! i love this sooooo much i can't wait for another chapter! i am glad that you didn't wait for you beta, i couldn't go that long, thank you! it seemed fine to me with the grammar. but the story is soo great i don't think i could even notice anyway. i love it i love it i love it! sorry i am just so crazy with curiousity and excitement! update soooooooon! ahhh :)
person moxie
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wait, what just happened?? love the story, btw.
person Nicole
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to update! Thanks.
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. It was brilliant to see those confessions of feelings. Pansy is braver then she gives herself credit for. Ginny is one of my favourites, I loved how she steered the guys into supporting Hermione without them even really realising it. LOL Now we just have to get Draco in a confessing mood. LOL Looking forward to more. :)
person firewall
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! Go Hermione, go soothe the little dragon.
person sanaa
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm confused now..why did he storm out? Urgh Draco Malfoy i swear would be the death of me
person Moonstar(formerly Given2Fly)
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws a bludger at you*

You sneaky little prat! LoL

Alright, that was just pure evil....I think you'd most definitely be sorted into Slytherin!^__^

*sigh*

Okay, okay. I've had my little temper tantrum. I patiently await the next chapter, oh Evil One. ^__-