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for In the Closet

by bellgirl

person chall
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter huh! i think you did great with it! i really am loving this can't wait to see what happens in the last chapter! :)
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An enjoyable ending to a lovely story. I do hope you'll be writing another story. Well done!!! :)
person mona
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No it can't be over!!!!!! i love this! there could be so much more. i have to say this story is one of my favs. this chapter was hotttt i really like their first time! great job, nothing to be worried about at all with any of this! so at the end with the feeling and the look hermione gave does she feel something for pansy? i take it that ron likes hermione too? see so much more story can come from this. In the closet part II, i can see it now lol. well i hope there will be a seq but if not this story was awesome i loved every moment. it made me laugh and over heated ;). Thanks for writting this! big fan.
person Lintu
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update soon!

This is one of the best Draco/Hermoine fics i've ever read, and I can't stand waiting. xD
I especially enjoy the angst between the two of them, and throwing in that bit in the last chapter where Draco finally says, "Fuck It" and kisses her, it was perfect!

I adore this story, and hope to see updates soon.
person anonymous
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! update soon!
person Shardae
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what he told Draco.... Add soon
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I absolutely cannot wait for the last chapter! Good Work! Post soon please!
person Sarah
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far I'm really loving this story. It's hot and funny and definitely original, I would never have even thought a Hermione/Pansy pairing possible, but I guess you proved me wrong. I just hope you update, and soon, so I can feed my latest addiction.
person MysticAngel77
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very nice chapter, and very busy busy! It makes sense to write characters from your own point of view of a situation, so your comment about being a strange teen is nice to hear. I definitely enjoy this progression more than something more immature (it would take forever to get anyone together!). Now I'm curious as to what Draco and Milton spoke about and what other kinds of twists you can put into this story before those silly people get together. Confrontation with the parents, the big bad Voldemort, etc...? I'm excited to read more! Don't worry about not having your beta around, it was fine, and I'm sure he'll polish it nicely when he gets back. Thank you for the update notices and the feedback on reviews :)
person Gracie
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM