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for In the Closet

by bellgirl

person Chavela
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I really liked the play between Draco and Hermione. It was so easy going. And Pansy's thoughts are always very entertaining. I can't wait to see what happens when things really start to pick up. I love this story. It is so funny. And I thought it really cool how both Draco and Hermione are virgins. I like that alot. I think that really adds to the story.
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it more and more keep them comming!
person rox4787
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more
person corazzz
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Amazing... E-mail me when you up-date? Thankies!!! corazie@gmail.com
person ladyknyght
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. I'm not 100% of the character accuracy for Hermoine, but then this is your story :-) I'm interested to see how this all works out.
person Chelsea
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Bellgirl

Hello my name is Chelsea and just let me say i love this story and i think that you are an amizing writer this is one of the best stories i have ever read i love that you are working some fun and lust in there and i hope that draco and Hermione end up together because i think they were ment to be together no matter what i hope that you put some interesting incounters for them in the story and not trying to be rude but i have read a lot of stories and i just hope that you don't dissappoint me because this is a masterpice i love it.


- Love You Chelsea !!!
person stacy
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great job! i love it! please update soon!
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter. hehehe
person fiona
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a fun chapter! the story and your rant! lol i loved it all, that has to be one of the best author rants i have ever read! some people can be such jerks! you are a great writter! it is nice to see that you said something because i have read some pretty mean ones on other peoples stories and the author doesn't stand up for themselves maybe perhaps because they are affraid or just "brushes it off". This site doesn't have the author protection that some other sites do so i think that authors should take the matter into their own hands. they may put their stories up to be reviewed and rated but there is a line and some reviewers take it just a little to far sometimes. and the complaints that they make are quite silly, like the bit where it is ooc and what not. um maybe they are for what jkr would write but maybe for that story the characters are right on! lol now you got me ranting anyway i love it, it's fun and can't wait for an update for this and your other! ;)
person rox4787
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think Pansy do about anything to Hermione anyway love it cant wait to read more