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for In the Closet

by bellgirl

person Darian
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really cute I was beginning to wonder when you were going to update! THanks looking forward to the next installment.
person Leeree
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Keep up the good work!

~Katie
person Heather
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is funny, I cant wait to read more. Update soon. I think that Draco should slip up somewhere and tell hermione what he feels or atleast have her in ear shot
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so great i love it! please update soon! very fun!
person Redlightspin
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting... (makes notch with index fingers and peers over them) very interesting....
person carabella
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!!! the suspense, will he make a move on patrol, or what!!! i need 2 kno so bad *claps hands ecstatically* on another note, whoever called u a racist bitch is an idiot who needs to grow up and realize that authors do not reflect their characters, and if they did, their stories would be incredibly boring and one-sided and inaccurate
person Dreamweaver
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable, I look forward to more chapters. I like that Pansy and Draco are friends and that they fancy the same girl. :)
person Jess
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's interesting, I like the way you have both Pansy and Draco after Hermione, and I also like the way you have Hermione's personality so far. Milton is a nice touch as well. Update soon! I can't wait for more! =)
person rush22
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved this!!! cant wait to read more!!! keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update please soon i love it