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for In the Closet

by bellgirl

schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, fairly certain I reviewed before everyone got userIDs, just a few minor corrections I noticed on a re-reading.
in chap 5 "just the site of her"--should be "sight", "shagging weasel's sister"--Weasel's, magic filled -->> magic-filled, mini Weasel -->> mini-Weasel, and in the last chap, it should be a fridge and not the fridge--huge kitchens usually have many refrigerators.
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the end. i wish it didnt though.
person Chavela
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SOFT!

I was blown away with Hermione and Pandsy being together. That was hot and sexy, and I loved every minute of it. That was a wonderful chapter, and I just adore this story.
person Chavela
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AW! That was such a great ending! I loved this story!

I hope to see more stories from you!
person anon
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Challenger
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i really loved it. thanks for writting it. :) it flowed nicely and i think well told. i still didn't get an email. i am not sure if something is wrong with you account or what. i tried to send you one but it came back as an error. so... i guess either check it out or just send them out again for the third time. anyway love the story, sorry to see it over with. but you could always write more if wanted, you left if off that way. it was a nice ending but it also could be continued. (note to readers she is easily talked into writting so if you want more don't hesitate to demand lol) love ya and thanks!
person fiona
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this story! really great job on it. very funny and had some really hot moments! it was light and refreshing. over all this story makes it to my list of favorites! i really liked how you ended it... but does it really have to end there? it made you wonder at the end... is she starting to have something for pansy? well i hope that you write something else soon. i look forward to an update for - a last request - :)
person Samm
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is excellent.
i love it.
totaly bookmarked it.
don't stop :)
person Moonstar
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily*


Aaaaaaaaaaaah. I loved it! Definitely worth waiting for. *fans selfs* I don't think I'll ever be able to look at a quesdilla the same way ever again! LoL


So, what's next? *already impatient for another great story* LoL!


And yes, definitely Slytherin. *winkwinknudgenudge*


person firewall
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You finished your story and tied everything up so neatly. I enjoyed this story very much and will look for other stories of yours. Thanks for sharing it with us.