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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I really want a boston creme pie donut now!!! GEESH!!! What a FANTASTIC premis for a story!! I am so caught up in this one that I am begging for an update today!! Is Hermione not going to have a little bit of power over him??
Merlin\'s balls!! Update soon!!!
Merlin\'s balls!! Update soon!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(swoons)
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh! You dirty---! It was just getting great!!!!!
*Takes deep breath and smooths back mussed hair* Ok, sorry, had to get that out. Now on to the formal review....
First of all, thanks very much for the email. It's enough for me to forgive how long it took you to update. Please note that I am not ususally a rabid fan given to excessive praise, but I'm afraid I simply can't help myself. Technical issues wise (is that even a phrase?) there are only a few spelling discrepencies, easily fixed. That's always a welcome change to the stories where it makes one wonder if the author ever went to school. Plot wise, you're doing an excellent job of keeping the reader interested and asking "what happens next?" A definite plus.
I look forward to chapter four!
Avari
*Takes deep breath and smooths back mussed hair* Ok, sorry, had to get that out. Now on to the formal review....
First of all, thanks very much for the email. It's enough for me to forgive how long it took you to update. Please note that I am not ususally a rabid fan given to excessive praise, but I'm afraid I simply can't help myself. Technical issues wise (is that even a phrase?) there are only a few spelling discrepencies, easily fixed. That's always a welcome change to the stories where it makes one wonder if the author ever went to school. Plot wise, you're doing an excellent job of keeping the reader interested and asking "what happens next?" A definite plus.
I look forward to chapter four!
Avari
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the email. glad to see this new chapter. having draco and hermione talking was cool. seeing the changes in him due to the manticore was an interesting twist.
i must say i loved the lucius/draco bit and now she has sworn to be his girl! that sneaky manticore is hooking up his hapless host.
can't wait for more.
i must say i loved the lucius/draco bit and now she has sworn to be his girl! that sneaky manticore is hooking up his hapless host.
can't wait for more.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!! draco is so infuriating that its absolutely perfect. can't wait for more!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!! draco is so infuriating that its absolutely perfect. can't wait for more!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm sorry you were sick, but I'm sooooooo glad you updated! That was great. I loved it. Definitely can't wait to see what Manticore!Draco is going to do next.
"DO YOU UNDERSTAND THE WORDS THAT ARE COMING FROM MY MOUTH?!" Lol, I was totally thinking of Chris Tucker in Rush Hour when I read that.
"DO YOU UNDERSTAND THE WORDS THAT ARE COMING FROM MY MOUTH?!" Lol, I was totally thinking of Chris Tucker in Rush Hour when I read that.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Soooooo good! Love!!!!! More...pretty please with whatever kind of Draco you want. =)
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! after finally getting the site back I quickly read this new, awesome chapter! I loved the ending...as well as the others finding them sleeping together...and of course, the real Draco talking to Hermione. Poor little dragon! More moments like that, please...along with the REAL reason we all write for the adult ff site ;)
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh P-L-U-EEZ KEEP writing this is soo good im beggin on my hands and knees