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for Seeing Two Worlds

by numbervertigo09

schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the first review I've ever left and also the only story I've ever felt truly deserved one. May I just say amazing writing, brava.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I thought that this was beautifully written... Please write more things like this... It even brought a tear to my eye... *sniff*
person Alison
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Thanks for writing! =o)
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful!
person Amessis
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just beautiful!
person Coralynn
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this fanfic. It was awesome, nicely worded, and I like the play of emotions.
person LILY
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! YOU ARE A GOD I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!! LOL THIS STORY IS SIMPLY ONE OF THE TOP 3 BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ ON HERE IF NOT THE BEST, I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I ENJOYED THIS STORY, I MEAN DAMN I FEEL LIKE CRYING, MAYBE LAUGHING, LIKE SCREWING SOMEBODY'S BRAINS OUT LMFAO I DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYMORE LOL NO BUT ALL KIDDING ASIDE *BOWS TO YOU* YOU ARE INCREDIBLY TALENTED AND I AM SERIOUSLY GONNA LOVE YOU FOREVER, IT'S 2:55 AM AND I'M NOT SLEEPY YET BUT I DON'T CARE CUZ I FINISHED YOUR STORY AND EVEN THOUGH I'M NOT SLEEPY I KNOW I WILL HAVE SOME VERY PLEASANT DREAMS WHEN I DO FALL ASLEEP LOL OK BUT I DON'T WANT TO SCARE YOU SO I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT YOU SHOULD DEFINITELY KEEP WRITING MORE STORIES AND I WANT TO THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME SO HAPPY =] YOU FUCKING ROCK!!
person squalmasy
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a wonderful story. The narration was beautifully poetic and I love the poignant emotion surrounding the entire story. It was thoughtful and heartfelt, yet had the subtle undertone of sadness that makes love stories like this so enjoyable to read. You handled the situation masterfully and have written the most delightful story I have read in far too long.

It's really too bad that most HP reviewers seem to lack the eloquence [or effort] to offer the sorts of comments that you deserve, but I'd like to let you know that it is impossible for anyone not to love this story. I commend you on your efforts, and, once again, amazing job.

-squalmasy