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for Kiara's Story

by AnyuBoo

person SnapesPet30
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Cool, can't wait for the dance.
person SnapesPet30
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, love the gift she gave Professor Snape. lol Rosie sure doesn't know when to quit. Great Job!
person Angie30
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol yup they are definetly determined. I think Rosie is right though Snape does fancy Kiara even if he doesn't want to admit it yet. Can't wait for the next update.
person Angie30
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter hun! It is just me or is Cordelia being a bit nosy and wanting to play match maker lol. Although I think I seem to know whom Kiara is staring at. *smirks* I can't wait til you update again. I'm so enjoying this story. Keep up the great work!
person LCDrusilla
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this quite well actually. At first it was a bit slow and seemed like the Marry Sue thing but even I'm guilty of that. You're doing a very good job of making Kiara sounding like a mature 11 and not a freakishly juvenile 16 year old. Do keep up the good work.




p.s. Thanks for reviewing my story.
person Angie30
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! I'm enjoying reading this story so much and I really like Kiara and how she interacts with Severus as teacher/student goes. Although I get the feeling that Dumbledore in his round about way is telling Severus he feels more for the girl then just pride that she is an top notch student. *Grins* I look forward to another update.
person Angie30
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is a really excellent story! I admit I just found it today and was curious and to my delight my curiosity has peaked even more. *Grins* Well done! I look forward to when you update.