rate_review Reviews

This story was great! It was the ideal love story. You handeled the storyline perfectly. However, there were a few mistakes, Grammar mistakes I assure you. The reason I gave you a three was because I could never really get all the way into it you know? If I were you I would keep it up. For future referneces, put a little more action in your stories and a little less detail. Other than that, it was excellent!

That was very sweet. Great job.