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Oh you so need to up-date soon. Totally loving this fic. So do what you do and up-date soon.

Elle the Evil one

dude, omg! I love this story! please continue on! i want to read more!!

one thing i have to say is




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that story is great! i cannot belive that i have not read it yet! hehe Im so glad that I did Go harry you tell DUmbledick! hehe yeah!!! whoooooo gods the story has gotten me hyper!!! hehe go HArry!!!!!!!!!GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Excellent update!!!

Awesome. I can't wait for more^.^.

Great story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

WOW this is good, I mean really good. I can not waite to read more.

Seems to me that Harry has gotten over his trauma a little fast, a little too fast. So Sev is a vamp. Interesting. I'm enjoying the overall action of your story, but I have a question; the line, "Today HE would be damned if he allowed this man to walk all over him without giving as good as he got," is a little confusing. Is he angry with Snape? He was the last one named before the line was written. I would think this would be how he thinks about Dumbledore. Oh, well. Fascinating story; please write more!!

Yea!!! Dudley is on his side! I only hope Harry can tell them before bad things start to happen. Then again, if Harry is as close to Snape as you imply, he already knows, right? How much bad can someone take in their lives before they snap? From personal experience, a lot less than what you've put your characters through has to happen to impact a life irreversibly. Isn't it great that in fiction anything can happen without consequences? I usually don't like so much torture in my stories, but I'm such a Harry/Severus fan that I'll try more of your story hoping things get better. They certainly don't need to be any more exciting. I'm also happy that Draco and Lucius have turned. Are they now the spy's for the light? And the new character is interesting. I can't wait until you explain what he and Snape are and how it will effect the plot!

I like it, so far so good....I really can't stand Dumbledore sometimes though....and this is one of the cases...he should have sent someone to check on Harry at least every other day......

*sighs* now before I begin ranting....*mutters "stipid dumbledork" quietly*

this is a great beginning for the story...I can't wait for updates.