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by cruttan

person firewall
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 Oh what a tangled web we weave.... LOL This is building into an incredibly amusing and good story. Well done.
person geo
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, update soon please!

geo
person Redlightspin
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hilarious! keep it up (cheeky grin)
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this had me in histerics!!!! it's fab, you HAVE to update soooon!!
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reading this story is so much fun! keep updating!
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've already reviewed this on your LJ, but after what happened to me today, I just couldn't pass up an opportunity to read this through again.

During my lunch break, I picked up one of those ridiculously, trashy Mills and Boon romances my mum has scattered around the house. The first word I read was "Impudent." I lost it then and there.

You've really given Draco the moxy to live up to his house. Cunning little snot that he is ;) He knows something's up and he's not gonna let it go. Once again, I loved this chapter - Harry especially. He's just so... malicious. LoL. And kudos to Hermione for trusting him with that charm. Boy-Who-Lived-Twice or not, no way would I trust him with my bits and bobbles.

Please update soon Cat!

Bek
person AraLuna
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just fantastic You make me want to drum my fingers together evilly a la Monty Burns. Excellent...

You know the brilliant thing about writing a story that is over the top is that you give yourself license to take this just about anywhere you please. And what deliciously wicked paths you are taking!! I simply can't wait to see how Hermione "proves" herself to Draco and if she has any fun examining her new appendages later. Honestly, she owes it to all of womankind to explore what makes men so facinated with their bits and pieces. Perhaps even a bit of experimentation. Just to see if the fairer sex really did get shafted(hehe) in the pleasure department.

Why is "Herm..." forbidden? Is it simply Hermann that is forbidden or did he have previous lustings for Hermione as a girl that he also forbade himself? Also, why doesn't Draco recognize Hermione? Did they not know each other well before or does she just look that different? I'm sure you'll answer all in good time!!

Yes you can consider my update a personal gift for your birthday. I wish I had known, I would have dedicated the chapter to you!! And as for your question, yes I adore opera. I think a third of the LPs I've got are Wagner or Puccini or Verdi. Anyhow, loved the chapter, please update soon!!!!
person lilith
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course I'm still reading, and I'm happy you liked my idea. The last chapter was great, Draco has trouble with his subconcious, the poor man. I could picture Hermione waddling like that, it was hilarious. Update soon!
person Starzstruck
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH wow. Lol. They're seriously going to turn her into a man? I can see some... entertaining paths... that this could take, lol. Can't wait for the next installment!
person Dreamweaver
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure what to expect when I first saw the title but I kept looking at it and gave it a go - which just goes to prove I should trust my instincts and just go with it more often. I've thoroughly enjoyed these chapters. (OMG - the realisation of Draco and his reactions to what he thought was a woman (haha) was hysterical) I look forward to reading more. :)