AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Hermann/Hermione

by cruttan

person Emmeline Vance
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!

Thanks for the delightfully quick update! Her first appearance on stage definitely had a pleasant effect on Draco, and I'm glad that he feels as rocked up as he does about her being a man being a woman (whilst actually being a woman, which he also doesn't know). It's such a hilarious and confusing concept, even for the readers (not to mention for Draco when he finds out...)! Blaise and Pansy make such wonderful friends in their own ways, and I especially like the fact that you've included clingy!Pansy in the story to begin with. Imagine her face when Hermione (the drag) and Draco get together!

Again, thanks so much for this chapter, and hope to get another update soon. Peace!

Love, me.
person Emily
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very funny. Can't wait for more =)
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hysterical! I love it even more than before, poor draco lol! Course what he did to Pansy was great. I can't wait for more!
person Redlightspin
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love excellent use of a classic
person AraLuna
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much fun... I really need fun right now. All I've been encountering lately is angst, and it doesn't put me in a good mood to study. Its been years since I've seen Victor/Victoria and I hesitate to go watch it again, because I want which ever plot points you use to be a surprise. Well, that and I don't have a TV to watch it on( my mum is recording eps of House for me to watch when I go back to visit this spring. *Sniff*- oh Hugh...)

I'm glad you've started right off with the d/hr interaction. You must be reading my mind, cause your stories always satisfy what ever fanfiction itch I have at the moment. Right now its the existance and progression of a plot (which is ironic as my story is getting by on only the thinnest whisp of a plot.) I'm following an H/Hr story on Portkey right now that is on its 11th chapter and Hermione still hasn't even entered the story except in flashback. Its a really good story but its driving me mad!!! I'm so glad Draco was immediately taken with Hermann/Hermione. I loved his reaction to her taking off the wig as well as his petulance when meeting her backstage. What I want to know is if he was ever attracted to her before? I'm sure you'll reveal all in good time.

What was Draco doing to Pansy with the bar of soap? I can't seem to figure it out, and, as I suspect it is really funny, I want to know!!! : )

You've commented to me before how you worry about the extent to which to describe clothing, and I just wanted to say I thought you did a fine job in this chapter. Just enough to give me an idea of how she looks and not too much that my imagination can't fill in the blanks with my personal idea of gaudy showgirl outfits. I think being vague is the key, since everyone has differing ideas about what is lovely or trashy, or classy, or slobby etc. Good job here. I've got some kind of wild Pricilla, Queen of the Desert sequin thing going on in my mind right and its working for me. Update soon!!!

-Ara-
person Chavela
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that one was alot better than the first chapter. I loved this chapter. It was good. I hope you update very soon.
person Waiting_Forever
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Got even better with the second chapter.
person geo
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEY!!!!!! more... please update!!!

geo
person laura
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, another great chapter! You are very talented, and have quite a flair for the comedy. I really enjoyed your portrayal of Draco and Pansy.
person Starzstruck
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far:D This whole "Mione pretending to be a man pretending to be a woman" thing is quite ingenious, and poor Draco! Thinks he was getting all hot for a dude! That was great. Keep up the good work, and if you feel like adding me to your update list, I most certainly wouldn't complain! :D

~Blessings~
~'Chele~